This week for writing we made a character profile on a book we read, then make a profile about it.
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, May 13, 2021
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Leo cool character profile I like the way you made a picture on your character so we know it is gost maybe next time you could say what he's scared of.
ReplyDeleteI really like How you has a ghost is your character Maybe next time you could have More facts about the ghost.
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