This week we have been writing a story from a video about a yellow umbrella. we also have been learning about perseverance, perseverance is about thinking about others.
here is a link to the video
At the time of dawn on a drafty stormy morning, the old creaky door to Miss Elem´s home for children creaked open. The little girl with the neon yellow umbrella, cautiously trotted into the orphanage with anger and right away found a place for her umbrella. Not wanting for the girl to see him, Borris quickly flung his head around the door frame, making sure he was hidden from view. Wandering off to the side, the girl observed the cheerful scene while the children searched in the box for hidden treasures. The girl giggled while she watched the little boy soaring around the room like a lamborghini. Her smile swiftly disappeared as she glared back to the umbrella stand and all she saw were tiny little puddles. Her favorite Umbrella was gone?
Do you know what perseverance is?
Hello Leo,
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing story you have created. I like all of the descriptive words you have added in the story. Maybe next time, re-look at your blog post because the answer to your current question is on top of your blog post.
Anyways, Gotta go now.
-Patrick
Hey Leo,
ReplyDeleteLove your story, I like how you described the door old and creaky but you used the same word for it opening but it is fine.
Thanks,
From Jacob
Hi Leo,
ReplyDeleteLove your writing! You have used some really descriptive language in your story. Do you enjoy doing writing like this?
How did this umbrella story make you feel?
Mrs Bryce